some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that measure are required. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

These days, the

number

of diseases is

incresing

becoming greater or larger

increasing

day

by

day

, and it is increasing because of

plethora

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a plethora

of reasons. It is a need to take some steps to control these diseases. I think that the best way to improve public

health

is by taking some measures

such

as control the traffic, control deforestation, limited

the

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number

number

of industries, stop the pollution of water, air and noise etc.

rather

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Rather

than increasing the

number

of sports facilities. To embark, I believe that environment plays a vital role in people's

health

, so there is a need to improve the environment which is very beneficial to the public and

environment

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the environment

can be

improve

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improved

by the

number

of factors

such

as afforestation,

for example

, if a country plants more than 20 trees in a

day

so it is fruitful for everyone. By controlling the amount of pollutions which is

produce

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produced

by different industries everyday can improve the public

health

, it is a great deal for countries to minimise the amount of pollutants from industries because we are living in the era of industrialisation and globalisation. Other factors, for illustration, by reducing the usage of air conditioner and

refrigerators etc

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refrigerators, etc.

refrigerators etc.

because global warming is reached at its highest peak and by

this

, the ozone layer is depleting

day

by

day

which is detrimental for everyone.

However

, some people think that by increasing the

number

of sports facilities, the public

health

will improve because

health

can

also

improve by exercising,

for example

, some people damage their

health

due to the lack of exercise and they eat lots of junk food.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

they think by increasing the

number

of sports facilities, one can improve his

health but

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health, but

I disagree with them because exercising

is depend

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depends

on

individual's motivation

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the individual's motivation

, so it is great to establish some programmes for awareness of people for

doing

the act that results in something coming to be

making

exercise rather than increasing sports facilities. To sum up, some steps should be taken for

improve

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improving

improved

the public

health

like smoking should be banned and like start the environmental friendly programmes.