Multicultural societies in which there are a mixture of ethnic people bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Migration of people

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various part of the world is becoming increasingly popular.

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, people end up settling in communities where they share

different cultural background

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a different cultural background

. Many believe there are more advantages of inhabiting in

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a multicultural

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than the potential setbacks that may arise. I completely agree with

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view.

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is because the problem that may emerge can be overcome and cultural mix leads societal development. The fear of losing cultural heritage is

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major issue that makes individuals believe that mixing with other people with different ethnicity may be a drawback for them. They think new immigrant may not respect their culture and

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could lead to clashes between them.

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, they are unaware that these issues have solutions. The local government or

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members can organise induction programs to keep the

new comers

any new participant in some activity

newcomers

informed on the land's cultural beliefs. Pamphlets can

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be distributed to each immigrant telling them about the cultures of their new society.

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way people will learn and respect the

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culture, thereby

avoiding unnecessary conflict. In

Africa

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Africa, for

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, describing a lady as fat is not conceived as being disrespectful unlike in places in the Europe where it is not tolerated.

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is aware of

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may avoid

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words in an environment like that. And

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will prevent any misunderstanding that may arise. Having a clear understanding of both cultures makes it easier for people to become accommodating, but could

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be the benefits? No. When people with different background live together they share knowledge and skills from the various

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cultures

.

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produces new techniques employed in carrying out some specific processes

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as building constructions.

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, it

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improves the lifestyle of the

community

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and

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generally results in

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development.

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, people from

eastern part

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the eastern part

of Nigeria are generally good entrepreneurs and their migration to places like Lagos has made the state

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of the biggest commercial cities of Africa.

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has also been

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been able to learn these skills, and

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has resulted in an enormous growth in the state’s income. In summary, there

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is

more merit

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in

having a multicultural society if people know how to deal with the issues that may arise. New skills acquisition and

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growth are the major advantages when we embrace people with different ethnic background.