Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea.Some people think they should be banned.Do you agree or disagree. Give examples for your answers.

Environmental nuisance to soil and water have been on the increase over the
last
two decades
as a result
of the increased usage of polythene
sacs
a bag made of paper or plastic for holding customer's purchases
sacks
for shopping. Despite the advantage of its light weight
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I strongly agree it should be made
illegal so
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illegal, so
as to create a
clean
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cleaner
environment and encourage the use of better alternatives. Opponents of
such
a ban are of the opinion that they are
more lighter
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lighter
in mass.People find it convenient using them because they are easier to carry and
thus
cause less burden.
For example
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a single polyvinyl chloride bag is known to weigh 50mg while paper bags are known to weigh much more.
However
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,
banning them would be more beneficial.One advantage of
such
a ban is that it would create a better surrounding.These
bags plastic
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bags, plastic
bags are known to litter the environment and in turn cause clogging of drainage pipes and proliferation of flies.
For instance
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,
a recent research showed that 80% of blocked drains are caused by them.
Also
,
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,
if they were stopped from being used
,
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they would encourage the use of better options.Supplementary items like paper bags are
more environmental
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more environmentally
friendly and cheaper.A case in point was a study which found out that they are less likely to cause land and water contamination. In conclusion
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despite the fact that plastic bags are known to be of lighter weights
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I strongly support
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its
use be stopped as it would create healthier surrounding and
also
make way for
cleaner option
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a cleaner option
like
paper bag
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a paper bag
paper bags
.
This
would benefit the individual and
community
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the community
in the long
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