Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea.Some people think they should be banned.Do you agree or disagree. Give examples for your answers.

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Environmental nuisance to soil and water have been on the increase over the

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two decades

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of the increased usage of polythene

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a bag made of paper or plastic for holding customer's purchases

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for shopping. Despite the advantage of its light weight

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I strongly agree it should be made

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illegal, so

as to create a

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cleaner

environment and encourage the use of better alternatives. Opponents of

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a ban are of the opinion that they are

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lighter

in mass.People find it convenient using them because they are easier to carry and

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cause less burden.

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a single polyvinyl chloride bag is known to weigh 50mg while paper bags are known to weigh much more.

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banning them would be more beneficial.One advantage of

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a ban is that it would create a better surrounding.These

bags plastic

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bags, plastic

bags are known to litter the environment and in turn cause clogging of drainage pipes and proliferation of flies.

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a recent research showed that 80% of blocked drains are caused by them.

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if they were stopped from being used

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they would encourage the use of better options.Supplementary items like paper bags are

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more environmentally

friendly and cheaper.A case in point was a study which found out that they are less likely to cause land and water contamination. In conclusion

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despite the fact that plastic bags are known to be of lighter weights

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I strongly support

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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

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use be stopped as it would create healthier surrounding and

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make way for

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a cleaner option

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a paper bag

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would benefit the individual and

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the community

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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5 paragraphs

249 words

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