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Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree?

This
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 essay argues that nowadays, many
people
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 assume that it is better to get a job with a large
institution
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 than a small
one
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. I believe
that is
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 a good idea because when they
work
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 in a famous
company
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, they have several chances to develop their skills. On the
one
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 hand, some individuals believe there are many benefits to working for a large
institution
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 rather than a small
one
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. Because a large
company
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 gives them much experience and they can
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 develop their skills, they can meet many professional
people
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 in a large
company
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;
in addition
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, they can make strong social relationships.
For instance
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, in Saudi Arabia, there is a survey whose results show that 70% of students prefer to
work
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 in a large
institution
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 because they believe that it can give them much experience after they graduate from university.
On the other hand
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, other individuals do not have a chance to
work
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 in a large
company
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 because many
people
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work
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 there, so they will
work
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 for a small
company
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. I believe that it is a good idea if they cannot
work
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 for a large
company
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, because many small companies are small, but in the future, they will become famous ones.
For example
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, in South Korea, there was a small
company
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 20 years ago, whose name is YQ, but now all the
people
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 in the world know
this
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company
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, and it is a famous
one
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 in all of Korea. In conclusion, it is not a problem if an individual does not get a job in a large
institution
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; maybe
this
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company
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 will become famous in the future. I believe that it is a good idea if they
work
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 in a large
company
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, but maybe working in a small
one
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 gives them many chances.

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task achievement
Make sure to clearly state your opinion in the introduction and keep it consistent throughout the essay.
coherence
Use clear topic sentences for each paragraph to show the main idea.
task achievement
Add more specific examples and details to support your points.
content
The essay presents a clear opinion on the topic.
content
Some good examples are used to support the points.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • corporate culture
  • hierarchy
  • marketability
  • professional development
  • entrepreneurial
  • autonomy
  • networking
  • prestigious
  • job security
  • scale of operations
  • benefits package
  • research and development
  • innovation
  • professional networking
  • career advancement
  • organizational structure
  • flatter hierarchy
  • versatile skill set
  • benefits
  • work-life balance
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