Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays,
erradicating
kill in large numbers
eradicating
poverty
is one of the world's major
concern
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concerns
as an increasing amount of people are becoming very poor. Each country attempts to deal with
poverty
throughout various types of actions. In
this
essay, I shall explain the causes behind the global problem of
poverty
.
Then
, I shall give a few examples of ways governments can help poor people.
Poverty
has been around for many centuries.
Although
former generations consider it with very little attention, researchers and governments are now trying to understand the mechanism behind
poverty
. A significant amount of intellectuals agrees on the fact that
poverty
is mainly due to human wars.
For instance
, the war in Iraq destroyed the houses of many inhabitants,
thus
leaving them without any form of wealth.
As a result
, many
iraqian
a family of North American Indian languages spoken by the Iroquois
Iroquoian
today live with less than a dollar a day
.
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.
We must note that
this
was not the case 10 years ago. When it comes to helping the poor, governments often have a wide range of possibilities. During
this
year, there has been a substantial number of 'yellow jacket' strikes in Paris.
This
movement mainly protested against the rise of taxes on fuel for cars.
Indeed most
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Indeed, most
of the strikers lived under minimum wages and argued they couldn't afford to pay more taxes
otherwise
they would not be able to live decently. The government became aware of these problems.
Consequently
, on the 26 of April 2019, the acting french president Emmanuel Macron decided to increase by 5 billion the amount of money given to social aids. In conclusion,
poverty
is an important problem which has persisted over the
last
centuries and, even though governments are not capable of
erradicating
kill in large numbers
eradicating
poverty
entirely, they try to
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limit
the effect of
poverty
on the life of the people.
For example
, in Sweden, rich people are highly taxed in order to redistribute wealth amongst the poor.
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