It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents For instance , for sport or music and others are not . however , it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that talented people represent a great source of inspiration to others. While some people believe that talented persons are born with their abnormal abilities
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others argue that knack can be acquired by learning and training. In
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essay
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I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support to the former view. According to many
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all humans are born with equal capacities with no difference at the level of talent and skills. Later on,
every one
all people
everyone
begin
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begins
to learn from the surrounding environment and gradually increase his knowledge and catch up more experience.
For instance
the great Portuguese football player C.Ronaldo may not be the most talented
player but
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player, but
by training hardly and total commitment he becomes a historical football player and may be the best at all.
On the other hand
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many argue that some people are born with natural knacks as a godsend and with little effort they can grow up their talent.
For example
the wonderful European musician Beethoven was deaf despite that he
mad
produced by a manufacturing process
made
a lot of picturesque symphonies. In
this
case we can see that Beethoven had no chance to learn music in a long period of his
life
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life, although
although
he had natural superpower mad him able to compose all of these
breathtakking
tending to cause suspension of regular breathing
breathtaking
music. Having looked to both sides
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although
learning can be a good way to become a well-known
sport's
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sports
man or
musician
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a musician
. From my point of view talent can't be acquired by learning and talented people are born with their abilities.
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