Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion

These days both parents work to cover all life expenses leads to some of them to send their children who are in pre-school age to

childcare

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child care

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

to

recive

get something; come into possession of

receive

recover

Recife

a better level of care

.

Accept space

.

On

other hand

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the other hand

, parents prefer to leave their children with grandparents to get

best career

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a better career

better career

.Personally,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would argue that the best choice is to send the kids to

childcare

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

. Those that who

support

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supports

care through

childcare

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child care

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

due to several reasons.

Firstly

, they claim that

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

contribute of teaching

children many

Accept comma addition

children, many

skills and help them to improve their abilities mentally and physically by using toys as

gadegets

a device or control that is very useful for a particular job

gadgets

of education and do alot of

activites

any specific behavior

activities

such

as singing, painting dancing which are

allow

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allowing

them to communicate with

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

.

Accept space

.

In addition

, they think it is the safest option owing to the fact that parents put the safety and

childre's

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shoulder

shoulders

chides

health

at

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in

the

first

.

another

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Another

important

considration

the process of giving careful thought to something

consideration

is

costs

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cost

.

Although

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Despite

these

benifites

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

of

childcare

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child care

centers but

Accept comma addition

centres, but

centres but

still some of them feel satisfied when send their

childern

a young person of either sex

children

to

grandparent house

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the grandparent house

during working days because they have a broad experience in

displinary

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the discipline

discipline

disciplinary

disciplining

of children and dealing with them

.

Accept space

.

More over

in addition

Moreover

, grandparents are the

second

closest persons to grandchildren after their parent so they give them

alot

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a lot

of love

,

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,

safety and care.

to

Suggestion

To

conclude,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

that the

advanteges

the quality of having a superior or more favorable position

advantages

advantage

of these

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

clearly

owiegh

the

benifits

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

of using relatives

,

Accept space

,

however

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

still see grandparents is the best

second

family of caring children.