Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion

These days both parents work to cover all life expenses leads to some of them to send their children who are in pre-school age to
childcare
Suggestion
child care
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
to
recive
get something; come into possession of
receive
recover
Recife
a better level of care
.
Accept space
.
On
other hand
Suggestion
the other hand
, parents prefer to leave their children with grandparents to get
best career
Suggestion
a better career
better career
.Personally,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would argue that the best choice is to send the kids to
childcare
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
. Those that who
support
Suggestion
supports
care through
childcare
Suggestion
child care
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
due to several reasons.
Firstly
, they claim that
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
contribute of teaching
children many
Accept comma addition
children, many
skills and help them to improve their abilities mentally and physically by using toys as
gadegets
a device or control that is very useful for a particular job
gadgets
of education and do alot of
activites
any specific behavior
activities
such
as singing, painting dancing which are
allow
Suggestion
allowing
them to communicate with
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
.
Accept space
.
In addition
, they think it is the safest option owing to the fact that parents put the safety and
childre's
Suggestion
shoulder
shoulders
chides
health
at
Suggestion
in
the
first
.
another
Suggestion
Another
important
considration
the process of giving careful thought to something
consideration
is
costs
Suggestion
cost
.
Although
Suggestion
Despite
these
benifites
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
of
childcare
Suggestion
child care
centers but
Accept comma addition
centres, but
centres but
still some of them feel satisfied when send their
childern
a young person of either sex
children
to
grandparent house
Suggestion
the grandparent house
during working days because they have a broad experience in
displinary
Suggestion
the discipline
discipline
disciplinary
disciplining
of children and dealing with them
.
Accept space
.
More over
in addition
Moreover
, grandparents are the
second
closest persons to grandchildren after their parent so they give them
alot
Suggestion
a lot
of love
,
Accept space
,
safety and care.
to
Suggestion
To
conclude,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
that the
advanteges
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
advantage
of these
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
clearly
owiegh
the
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
of using relatives
,
Accept space
,
however
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
still see grandparents is the best
second
family of caring children.

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