In some countries, increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast foods. Therefore, government should impose higher taxes in this kind of food. Do you agree/ disagree.

Due to urbanization and exposure to the multiple cuisines, people are inclining more towards the junk food which is prone to numerous health ailments. Some people are of the opinion that as these foods is unhealthy, government should

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impose strict taxes against them. I accord with

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statement. There are umpteen factors why individuals should not consume fast foods.

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and foremost reason is that these foods have

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a high amount

high amounts

of toxic ingredients like Monosodium glutamate, palm

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oil, which

makes these foods feel good

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tongue, so people consume high amounts of these foods which results in genetic disorders in children.

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, reports have shown Maggi contains more than triple

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amounts

of allowed lead and children love eating

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later stages. Another reason is that high consumption of fast foods leads to obesity and as we all know obese people suffer from heart, liver and kidney disorders like cardiac arrest, kidney stones, liver failure etc.

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, In America,

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a plethora

of people is suffering from obesity and heart diseases and the reason is excessive consumption of fast-food in their daily routine.

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However fast

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foods are dangerous, green vegetables are not safe either. Due to excessive use of pesticides and fertilizers while growing crops, people who consume fruits and green vegetables

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suffer from health problems.

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, In India, myriad individuals are suffering from genetic disorders as farmers use pesticides and fertilizers in their fields and sometimes they inject artificial

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in fruits to grow them quickly. To encapsulate,

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enormous intake

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the enormous intake

of fast-food is dangerous and there should be strict measures to restrict their consumption, government

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make sure that the other means of food like green vegetables and fruits are

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safe to consume.