Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter describe the photograph you sent to the competition tell him/her about the exhibition where your photo will be shown invite him/her to the exhibition

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Dear John, I hope

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message finds you well and thriving. I am excited to share some fantastic news with you: one of my photographs has been selected for display in an upcoming photography exhibition! As you are aware, my passion lies in nature photography. Recently, during my safari trip to the forest

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month, I had the opportunity to capture some breathtaking shots of wildlife. The photograph I submitted features a stunning tiger with her two cubs gracefully drinking from a river. I am thrilled to announce that

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image won first place in the 'Wild Animals' category of the photography competition organized by Nature magazine. The exhibition where my winning photo will be displayed is scheduled for April 10th in Delhi, hosted by Nature magazine. It promises to be an exciting event, showcasing a range of outstanding photographs from various talented photographers. I would be overjoyed if you could attend the exhibition. I have already arranged your accommodation and secured passes for you, ensuring you have a hassle-free experience. I am confident that you will thoroughly enjoy the splendid array of photographs on display. Please extend my warm regards to your family. I eagerly await your response regarding your attendance at

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special event. Best wishes,

Sumit

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure each paragraph maintains a clear focus. The introduction could be strengthened by linking the excitement about winning the competition to the invitation more directly.

Task Achievement

Consider providing more details about the exhibition itself, such as the location and time, to enhance the completeness of your response.

Task Achievement

The friendly and inviting tone throughout the letter is excellent.

Coherence and Cohesion

The description of the photograph is vivid and engaging, effectively conveying your enthusiasm.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

209 words

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