Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Apart from food and water,
health
care needs are fundamental to human survival. For
this
, many people are proposing for countries
to provide
Suggestion
provide
these services free to their
citizens even
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citizens, even
if the expensive ones
such
as the newer therapeutic options are not included. I completely agree with
this
viewpoint.
To begin
, if these medical services are made free to everyone it will strengthen the nations Human Resources.
In other words
, providing the medical treatment to people with no financial charge will increase patronage and reduce mortality rate
,
Accept space
,
hence
, ensuring that countries have healthy manpower. Again,
this
will ensure that quality medication is delivered, as there will be less fake drugs from illegal drug producing companies.
For instance
, in the US, the producers of imitations of antenatal medications stopped their production when the government made antenatal care free for women.
In addition
, the idea of free hospital services will
also
ensure that universal
health
care coverage is achieved. It implies that both the rich and the poor will have equal access to medical services. Take
for example
, in Australia, every resident irrespective of social status
assess
Suggestion
assesses
health
services in the same place without charge. Other advantages it have include the reduction in medical tourism among the wealthy and will
also
discourage the use of harmful herbal medications that were patronized because while orthodox medicines were
unaffordable
impossible to avoid or evade
unavoidable
. In summary,
this
essay discussed, and I agree completely, that
countries providing
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countries, providing
medical services free to its citizens will not only strengthen their workforce but
also
ensure that universal
health
coverage is achieved and maintained.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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