some people believe that now a days we have too many choices. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Despite of great advances being made in the science and
technolohy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
, their credibility in broadening the horizon of opportunities for human is still controversial. There are several who opine that, a man now has a lot more options available to him than the man in old times. I personally agree with the idea, and I
believ
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
, changes in the transport,
telebusiness
and better health facilities are of paramount importance in
this
regard.
Firstly
, in any country, a well developed system of of transportation provides safe commuting for its citizen and for the businesses. Because, remarkable advances have been made in
this
sector, from high speed trains to international airlines, all provided people the liberty of choices,
furthermore
, it has brought the customer and the production units, the two ends of the business chain together,
hence
boosted trading.
For instance
, due to its
magnificiently
characterized by grandeur
magnificent
magnificently
stretched rail system of China, it has mounted its economy to
second
largesr
above average in size or number or quantity or magnitude or extent
largest
league
large
in the world.
Secondly
, a healthy community was being a dream to
acheive
to gain with effort
achieve
by all nations around the globe. Fortunately,
introduction
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the introduction
of the vaccination, new antibiotics and modernized health care system has dramatically curbed number of fatal diseases. A healthy society raises a healthy workforce, vital for
development
Suggestion
the development
of the country.
For example
, malaria has been a killer ailment in the
pas
the time that has elapsed
past
,
Accept space
,
t but now it is fully
treatbale
Manageable; tractable; hence, moderate; not violent
treatable
. To conclude,
although
, every new inventions
has
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have
some pros attached to it, but on
bigger
Suggestion
the big
screen advantages of having more options outweigh its drawbacks.
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