For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

Art is a self-driven skill
that is
built from inside the person and is born by nature but not by someone's promptness or suggestions. It is an inbuilt talent hidden in an individual and will come out after proper nurturing or exhibiting the
such
.
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a recent World,
this
is not much preferred as an essential
tool but
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tool, but
only as a side activity for
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the time pass tool
time pass tools
.
Nevertheless
, it has become an entertainment or passion rather than a compulsory path to livelihood.
This
is because of many reasons like less income, lack of encouragement, competition and many more.
Besides
, the opportunities are very less in number with too limited income, that results in poverty too. Payment received for
arts
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the arts
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does not
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
requirement
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requirement, then
then
again leading to
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Jo
, business and so on.
Inspite
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In spite
of encouraging, people having creativity are being discouraged with unnecessary politics and reasons. Recent days, technology has brought drastic changes in science and culture too. Independent people are running towards self earning like own business run upon their ecstasy which helps them in leading
life
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a life
. Broad thinking and a clear understanding
makes
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make
an individual feel the heat of
te
definite article
the
requirement of art.
For example
, ROBOTICS is being used widely by many organizations for automation of multiple methods of work.
This
is linked up with Science as it has to be performed by a ROBOT which, only Science can do.
Although
the object ROBOT is an output of Science and used for technology, it is the creative work of ART.
Thus
, ART is
inseperable
not capable of being separated
inseparable
from other sources or modern means of living.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
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  • In general

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