Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

Well developed nations are supposed to help lesser nations with charity in situations of disasters that are related to nature.
This
essay agrees with the statement because the act of helping others proves these
countries
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country
humane and doing
this
will not affect their
economy
negatively. The act of helping others will prove these
countries
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country
humane. It is only a normal human response to respond to the suffering of others by helping them out with whatever thing they need at that point and
this
can be seen in nations helping nations. A very good example that portrays
this
is the help that was received by the Asian
country
Nepal, which is a less developed nation, when they experienced their
first
volcanic eruption in 10years, in 2002. A relief was sent to
this
country
by the United States. So other rich countries can learn from
this
as well and be well concerned about their less privileged neighbours.
This
will prove their humanity.
Moreso
, doing
this
will not affect these countries'
economy
negatively. Since these countries are well developed in all aspects and are very rich, it will cost them absolutely nothing helping other nations who are less privileged. Since they have nothing to lose, it will only make sense to help. A study carried out in 2003 on the United States'
economy
showed that there was a 10% increase in the
country
's gross domestic product, which is directly proportional to the increase in the wealth of the nation.
This
was around the time that they helped the
country
Nepal. So rather than
have
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having
a loss, it is seen that
this
country
rather increased in its wealth. To conclude, rich countries should provide assistance to poorer countries facing naturally occurring disasters because it is an act of humanity and it will cost their
economy
nothing to do so.
Submitted by mickdebby6 on

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