Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by government. others believe those who financed the construction of a building should be free to design it as they fit. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In major cities, there
are
Suggestion
is
a plethora of building structures with the
skyscrappers
a very tall building with many stories
skyscrapers
skyscraper
being the most common. It
then
begs the question of who should determine what a building should look like. Some have said it is the
government
's responsibility while others say
its
the thing named or in question
it
should be the owners. In my view,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
agree with the former view.
To begin
, the
government
should have the function of approving building plans so as to ensure conformity with the master plan and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
agree.
In other words
, they typically reserve certain areas for residential and business development for easy running of the cities. The supporters of the view believe if governments hands off building design, house owners would build houses indiscriminately which would disfigure the city's landscape.
For example
,
highrise
used of buildings of many stories equipped with elevators; tall
high-rise
here's
edifice
are built
Suggestion
is built
in commercial areas in major cities of the world in line with
government's plan
Suggestion
the government's plan
and
this
clusters create an amazing scenery.
In contrast
, some people opine that funding parties of
such
project should have the
perogative
a right reserved exclusively by a particular person or group (especially a hereditary or official right)
prerogative
of
chosing
pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives
choosing
causing
what they desire. People should be at a liberty to determine what they wish to build,
afterall
Suggestion
after all
it is their money being spent,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
may desire a bungalow while the other man wants a storey building.
For
instance in
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instance, in
Victoria
Island Lagos
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Island, Lagos
, the building are not uniform and they serve both residential, commercial and recreational activities.
Although
, there are diverse views on
this
issue,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe
government
should determine and approve building designs so as to ensure people follow laid down plans.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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