Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer?

With quality of life increasing, people tend to go out for broadening their views. Some people like to take a
journey
with friends or family, but other people love to
travel
by themselves.I prefer to
travel
with
others
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others, such
such
as colleges or friends for the following reasons.
Firstly
,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
with a
companion
can make
tour
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a tour
easier.
For instance
, the
companion
would take photos instantly for us when we meet with some vivid landscapes. Especially for female, the
companion
could help us to get out of trouble when we cannot go out at night.
Secondly
, travelling with a
companion
can improve friends' relationships.
we
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We
communicate and share innovative
ideas each other
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ideas with each other
during the course of
journey
for there is no much time to do so in the working day. We even talk with a joke make the
journey
full of pleasure. Of course, other people decline to
travel
collectively because it is less efficient than
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
individually.Taking
catching coach
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a catching coach
as an example, we must wait for the
companion
to get on the coach together because of the different pace of living.
traveling
Suggestion
Travelling
Traveling
alone is more free and convenient. Sometimes, we just make
self refresh
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a self refresh
in a different condition by
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
and not want to be bothered by others. We may
immediate
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immediately
and observe the life circle from the destination alone in a new view. To summarize, I would
travel
alone if I intend to make a quiet
journey
,
Accept space
,
but I prefer to
travel
with friends or family in most time because it will make us more intimate during the
journey
.
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