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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion?

#money #time
The majority of the people think that, having the abundant
money
 and less free
time
 is
best
Suggestion
the best
 way to spend
life
Suggestion
a life
.
However
,
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 thinks that, earning enough
money
 and investing more
time
 for
life
 is another way of living
leisure
Suggestion
the leisure life
life
. In my opinion, both points have their own positive as well as negative aspects, but spending more
leisure quality
Accept comma addition
leisure, quality
 spells with enough
money
 is always better in order to find satisfaction in
life
.
To begin
 with,
money
 in the form of the cash or property balances the lives in every-way. The
life
 will be more stress free, if we have a huge amount a
liquate
distribute according to a plan or set apart for a special purpose
allocate
 cash to buy anything we want or just simply spend on normal things
such
 as, cloths, shoes, designer
jewelry
an adornment (as a bracelet or ring or necklace) made of precious metals and set with gems (or imitation gems)
jewellery
Jewelry
 etc.
However
, on the other side of
coin
Suggestion
the coin
, we should accept that there will be less
time
 for family and friends, which is sometimes critical to handle when it comes to the personal relations or family level.
This
 statement
can be understand
Suggestion
can be understood
 clearly by
this
 example, according to a survey reported in the Times journal about the rich people’s
life
 and its state, that 37% of rich families have poor family relations due to less
leisure
time
 with their loved once.
Nevertheless
, the people who really love to give their maximum
time
 in order to enjoy their relations with less income result in satisfying
life
 too. But, sometimes or most of the times they have to compromise their
life
 in term of shopping, luxurious things, home, cars, bikes and cloths etc. Let’s review an example, the television and media company Sony interviewed around 500 middle class families in their show named
leisure
. They have been asked several questions about
money
-
life
 and satisfaction
index
Accept comma addition
index, then
then
 they come to
conclusion
Suggestion
conclude
 that, the people were so happy with enough
money
 and they really do enjoy their relations and family
time
. In conclusion,
money
 cannot buy the happiness and healthy relations which clearly expounds that, earning lower income and enjoying more
time
 with loved ones is always better than the more
money
 and less free
time
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial security
  • facilitating
  • lifestyle
  • professional development
  • increased stress
  • work-life balance
  • hobbies
  • quality time
  • physical and mental health
  • financial constraints
  • luxury items
  • overall well-being
  • personal growth
  • middle ground
  • sacrificing
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