Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion?

#money #time

The majority of the people think that, having the abundant

money

and less free

time

is the best way to spend a

life

However

, some think that, earning enough

money

and investing more

time

for

life

is another way of living

leisure

Suggestion

the leisure life

life

. In my opinion, both points have their own positive as well as negative aspects, but spending more quality spells with enough

money

is always better in order to find satisfaction in

life

To begin

with,

money

in the form of the cash or property balances the lives in every-way. The

life

will be more stress free, if we have a huge amount of cash to buy anything we want or just simply spend on normal things

such

as, cloths, shoes, designer

jewelry

an adornment (as a bracelet or ring or necklace) made of precious metals and set with gems (or imitation gems)

jewellery

Jewelry

etc.

However

, on the other side of the coin, we should accept that there will be less

time

for family and friends, which is sometimes critical to handle when it comes to the personal relations or family level.

This

statement can be understood clearly by

this

example, according to a survey reported in the Times journal about the rich people’s

life

and its state, that 37% of rich families have poor family relations due to less leisure

time

with their loved once.

Nevertheless

, the people who really love to give their maximum

time

in order to enjoy their relations with less income result in satisfying

life

too. But, sometimes or most of the times they have to compromise their

life

in term of shopping, luxurious things, home, cars, bikes and cloths etc. Let’s review an example, the television and media company Sony interviewed around 500 middle class families in their show named leisure. They have been asked several questions about

money

life

and satisfaction index, and

then

they came to conclude that, the people were so happy with enough

money

and they really do enjoy their relations and family

time

. In conclusion,

money

cannot buy the happiness and healthy relations which clearly expounds that, earning lower income and enjoying more

time

with loved ones is always better than the more

money

and less free

time

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

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349 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

financial security
facilitating
lifestyle
professional development
increased stress
work-life balance
hobbies
quality time
physical and mental health
financial constraints
luxury items
overall well-being
personal growth
middle ground
sacrificing

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

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