Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The discussion of whether young people nowadays should be taught to be good parents and what skills needed to be ones will be presented as below.
Firstly
, raising a
child
nowadays is much more complicated than 15 years before because with the advance of society, parents are expected more, specifically to not only provide their kids with sufficient basic needs
such
as food,
shelter but
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shelter, but
also
help the
child
to realize his/her potentials and show enough affection, love and guidance. Henceforth, youngsters need training about
parental
Suggestion
parenting
skills, which do not come naturally, so that they are prepared to give the best to the future children without, hopefully, too
much
Suggestion
many
trials and errors.
Secondly
, the opportunity to learn about parenting would make young people better themselves. They will be more understanding and
empathetic
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empathizing
with their parents because once
youngsters
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the youngsters
are aware of the hardship their parents encounter when bringing them up, they will make an effort to be worthy of that parental love and be a good
child
.
Additionally
,
this
type of education on how to be a good parent will develop a sense of responsibility towards youngsters because they realize that one day, their babies will need to count on them, and they will be the
first
and foremost example for these little humans to look up to so today’s youngsters will be more mindful of their actions.
Parental
Suggestion
Parenting
skills are numerous and
also
vary
accordingly
to situations.
However
, I strongly believe that one of the most important functions as a parent is to help your
child
to learn, and support their learning.
This
serve
Suggestion
serves
as an end to help your children realize their potentials, no matter what it is. It is
such
a shame that some skill sets of children are neglected just because those are not commonly viewed as talents. Another crucial parental skill is understanding and communication.
This
means that youngsters should be taught to learn to view things from different perspective or in another word “to put himself/herself in another’s shoes” and to communicate effectively to resolve disagreement. Since people sometimes assume that as a parent, you have the privilege to be always right and to yell at your
child
when disagreement occurs.
This
is not an effective upbringing method because your children are deprived of the chance to voice their opinions, and
gradually become
Suggestion
gradually becomes
distant with you. All in all, I believe that the education of parental skills is much needed in
this
modern day. It will benefit
firstly
youngsters and their families, and generally to the whole society because every family is the core of society.
Submitted by Thanh on

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