Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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businesses
high value
of their meat including Suggestion
the high value
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this
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public
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the public
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them.
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and create a biodiversity like it was in the past. Suggestion
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