Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Nowadays, the question of whether extreme sports, like
sky diving
performing acrobatics in free fall before pulling the ripcord of a parachute
skydiving
or skiing, should be banned or
not has been receiving
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not, have been receiving
not have been receiving
a great deal of public attention. I completely disagree with the opinion of prohibiting extreme sports. Extreme sports are not as so dangerous as it seems to be.
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with, since there are a number of regulations, procedures and safety measures ensuring little risks while participating in these sports.
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, the proliferation of protective equipment,
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as helmets or particular play area for beginners, provide participants with minimum fatal situations.
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, by regulating and requiring specific training and preparation courses in terms of a particular sport, people can equip themselves with relevant and adequate qualifications in order to do these sports safely.
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means that players would enjoy their activities rather be afraid of them.
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, it would be wrong to ban these sports as well as difficult to enforce a ban.
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, people have a right to enjoy themselves and freedom of choice. In fact, people are likely to give a try on
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new and dangerous things, which
rewards them a
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rewards them with a
sense of accomplishment.
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, if extreme sports are prohibited, who would decide which sports should be?
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may lead to a misconception about sports generally, limiting people from various and diverse recreational activities as well. In conclusion, I believe that people should be allowed to play
sports whether
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sports, whether
their characteristics are dangerous or not, and the approval or rejection decisions should be dependent to players. By improving equipment and providing training classes serious problems could be minimized.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adrenaline rush
  • risk threshold
  • thrill-seeking
  • safety protocols
  • hazard assessment
  • adventure tourism
  • regulatory framework
  • personal autonomy
  • informed consent
  • risk mitigation strategies
  • thrill-seeking behavior
  • protective gear
  • extreme athleticism
  • freedom of choice
  • accident prevalence
  • emergency response
  • courage and resilience
  • endorphin release
  • legal implications
  • peer pressure effects
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