Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

To some persons, wealth is most essential because it gives one the chance to help others.
, because of the unappreciative nature of most individuals, I disagree with
opinion. I believe that the primary use of wealth should be for one's responsibilities. Certain people only regard affluent individuals when they help others.
For example
, in some communities, only rich people who assist societal members with their riches. They believe that when
opulent persons are in need, their good deed will speak for them.
, even in our different places of worship, people are advised to aid others as
that is
the most regarded use of affluence.
, most individuals are ungrateful.
For instance
, in 2003
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a very wealthy man who always helped people in my community took ill. He spent most of his
money but
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money, but
still could not get cured. His wife and children asked most community members for financial help but very few were forthcoming.
, he died. People whom he had invested in failed him.
, I think providing the comforts of life for oneself and family is more important than assisting others.
education for children or helping them start business as the case may be, nice vacations, quality Healthcare and adequate saving.
way, prosperity is retained in the family and fund is saved for unexpected events
of relying on people who may disappoint you. In conclusion, helping people is
nice but
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nice, but
due to the ingratitude shown by most persons, I believe that the most rational thing to do with one's wealth is to invest in oneself and family.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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