Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Air
travel
has always been
peoples' best choice
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the peoples' best choice
of transportation and has from time gained popularity. Some people
feels
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feel
that it should be confined
as a result
of
air
contamination it causes and the world's fuel it consumes.
This
essay will argue why
air
travel
is the best among others and not to be restricted for
such
reasons.
First
and foremost, the belief of placing restriction on
air
travel
due to the pollution it causes and the word's fuel it consumes, considering the increasing no of aircraft,
for instance
, travelling
on
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by
air
, on
daily basis
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a daily basis
all over the world and the emissions released
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
the
air
,
this
in return contributes adversely to health problems and global warming.
Moreover
, the fuel consumed by these aircraft involves a lot of money by the company,
therefore
,
this
made its cost higher than other means of transportation.
As a result
of these, restricting
air
travel
can be considered. Meanwhile, when it comes to meeting up with time and convenience,
air
travel
is, perhaps, the best. Reason being that, it moves in the
air
without any traffic jam, bad road, security threat, environmental pollution and much more. A very good example of
this
is, when I was to attend a seminar in Abuja, Nigeria, it took me just 50 minutes from
Lagos which
Accept comma addition
Lagos, which
invarably
without variation or change, in every case
invariably
, I could have spent about 10 hours on the road. For these reasons,
air
travel
should not be confined. Summarily,
this
essay argued why
air
travel
is the best among other means of transportation. I am of the opinion that, it is obviously the best because it is faster and convenient despite
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
cost among others.

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