Many people believe cities should not try to preserve its old, historic buildings and instead ,they should destroy them and replace them with modern buildings. To what extent do you agree?

A historic buildings in the cities are quintessential role in the development of an identity of the town. Having said that, some section of the people
believe
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believes
that destroying an old heritage
sites
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site
will pave the way for a new modern
facilities
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facility
. I will be discussing about
this
topic in a detail and giving my view on
this
. A monumental constructions are the heart of towns and it leads to a major tourist attraction point.
For instance
, A
histroic
belonging to the past; of what is important or famous in the past
historic
sites are recognized as a world heritage and seven
woners
have a wish or desire to know something
wonders
in the world
also
represent a larger old
construcution
the act of constructing something
construction
constructions
.
This
old
masions
a craftsman who works with stone or brick
masons
mansions
gives
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give
a large enough revenue through
tourisam
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
, local
employement
the state of being employed or having a job
employment
and
unquie
radically distinctive and without equal
unique
recognization
the state or quality of being recognized or acknowledged
recognition
to the town.
For example
, A Taj Mahal from India has provided
tremedous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
tremendous
revenue and foreign attraction to the small town called Agra in India.
However
, there are plethora of old buildings are there across the
glob
the 3rd planet from the sun; the planet we live on
globe
, but only limited of them got attention and making
positive impact
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a positive impact
.
Also
, in order to maintain
this sites
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this site
these sites
, there
are
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is
ample investment
needed which
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needed, which
comes at
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
opportunity loss.
Eventhough
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Even though
this
plural of "this"
these
monuments are not economically viable, they teach us
unvalueable historic lesson
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an invaluable history lesson
invaluable historic lesson
invaluable history lesson
unvalueable history lesson
for the generation to come. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the statement on not preserving the old building.
Instead
, we should create an atmosphere where
this
structures
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structure
are preserved
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is preserved
, marketed and financially sustainable.

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