Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, student studied distinctive subjects like
maths science
Accept comma addition
maths, science
, arts.
history
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History
and so on. Many people
debat
the state of being unsure of something
doubt
debate
that, which
subject
is utmost
importance
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important
in todays world. In my prospective, being expert in science and
techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
ought to be more
benifical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
in
this
modern world On one hand. It is
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believed
, that in
compersion
the act of examining resemblances
comparison
to others
subject
history
render the
knowladge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
knowledges
aboutv
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about v
role played by
anscestors
;
Accept space
;
futhermore
in addition
furthermore
, plays a vital role in
ones
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one's
life, as one can learn
alot
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a lot
from the past
ecperiences
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experiences
.
History
, is a most significant
schoool
an educational institution
school
social
subject
, brainwash student about the past
devasting
making light of
devastating
life incidents.
History
subject
educated about these crucial situations, so they will aware of the
consequmces
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
consequence
amd
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
hopefully avoid any situations in the future.
however
Suggestion
However
, others skills and medium of communications can be used for the same, rather than
history
as a school
subject
. On
other hand
Suggestion
the other hand
, few people argue that, our future can be made superior only with the help of Science and
Techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
Technology
.
Hence
, these
subject
Suggestion
subjects
should consider as the
majoe
of greater importance or stature or rank
major
important
subject
in school because
itb
the thing named or in question
it
helps to fused student with modern
Techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
and
revoluation
a drastic and far-reaching change in ways of thinking and behaving
revolution
evaluation
revelation
, As, a major
subject
it will generate skillfull and expert students
at
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in
the field of Science and
Techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
Technology
in
future
Suggestion
the future
. For
Instence
an occurrence of something
instance
instances
instanced
, some
thimg
any movable possession (especially articles of clothing)
things
thing
that seemed impossible in
few decades
Suggestion
a few decades
ago is now available at our
fingure
any of the terminal members of the hand (sometimes excepting the thumb)
finger
,. Communication is one of the best
example
Suggestion
examples
of advancements in
Techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
. In earlier days, on required numerous days to convey a message to someone,
where as
on the other hand
whereas
people are now just a phone call away.
In contrast
,
although
people may vary in their opinions,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
concur that past is gone and we cannot improvise it by any
cgande
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
chance
. So.
we
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We
must
focused
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focus
to
devloped
being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful
developed
new Invention in Science and
Techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
Technology
. So that Science and
Techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
Technology
ought to be
most important
Suggestion
more important
school
subject
rather than
history
.

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