Nowadays, the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the type of relationship that people have? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Nowadays the
way
people interact with each other has changed because of
technology
. Yes, the
technology
has changed interaction of people in very enhanced manner. Earlier people use to wait and try to find easy ways to
contact
their friends or relatives
leaving
the experience of being alive; the course of human events and activities
living
far. In
past there
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the past, there
the past there
was no quick
way
to
contact
or establish any
communication
between one person to the other person. The drawback
with
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to
past
communication
system was that it was very slow and were time taking process
such
as telegram letter etc.
people
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People
use to be afraid to write their personal feedback or things to their loved ones due to
insecure medium
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an insecure medium
of
communication
. When it comes to professional level, the privacy and accuracy should be
maintained but
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maintained, but
that time there was no secure
communication
. Now the things have changed around people from far distance
contact
their loved ones in
an
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a
way
and
quick
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quickest
way
which improves the interaction levels between two people. Quality the interaction between people to people has improved because the people are equipped with high
tec
a school teaching mechanical and industrial arts and the applied sciences
tech
technology
which enhances the
communication
. There are
many many
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many, many
medium
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mediums
now which
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now, which
are available
such
as internet, calling cards
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
The
technology
has provide
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has provided
the mobility
faster which
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faster, which
help
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helps
people to interact at any time anywhere in the world. People can
contact
their friend or
relative s
estimated by comparison; not absolute or complete
relatives
anytime they want. It has become so easier and friendly to be in touch with your friends relatives and even unknown people.
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