Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?

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Nowadays, the invasion of
privacy
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of famous people,
such
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as celebrities, on mass media has been receiving a great deal of public attention.
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the media somehow violates and gives more attention to the private lives, there is no need to give extra protection to them.
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with, since famous people have profound influences on the public, their personal lives would be a target of the media.
In other words
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, news about public figures would be attractive to a number of audiences who are fans and concerned about their idols’ lives, which guarantees a profit for the news’ owner.
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, once a famous person has a flaw, he would be criticized more strictly than an ordinary one would be.
For example
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, a singer wears a bag made of an animal hide, which encourages her fans to do the same thing. It is essential for the media
to proceed
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proceed
against her action more strictly than the same act of an ordinary one.
On the other hand
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, giving more concerns about
famous figures’ personal lives
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the famous figures’ personal lives
should be taken into account.
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, it is true that personal
privacy
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is a radical demand for each person,
therefore
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, famous ones are
also
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in need. In fact, some celebrities are miserable that they even lose their freedom at home because there are many paparazzi around their homes watching and capturing them any time.
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, offering a special treat for their
privacy
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may exaggerate the issue because they are capable of prosecuting who are invading their personal life.
This
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means that
people whoever
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people, whoever
attack
personal life
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the personal life
of
any one
any person
anyone
should be considered a crime. In conclusion, a popular figure is merely a person who needs the
privacy
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for himself. While the media ought to respect his
privacy
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demand in order to avoid committing an
offense
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offence
, having more personal
privacy
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should be treated by his
own
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owner
.
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