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Write about the following topic: Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? Give reasons for your answer. Write at least 250 words

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When it comes to human right
,
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 t is important that liberty of speech be recognized and be encouraged in order to create a
liberty
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liberated
 society. There are many reasons to support
this
 idea as following.
First
 of all, the process when people share their opinions, their knowledge means that they are giving others fresh perspectives, brand new ideas, etc.
This
 is because we have different mindsets, and by communication, we all grow together.
For example
, a group discussion
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is considered
 to be successful when a variety of arguments
are came
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are coming
are come
come
 up creatively
by
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with
 a wide range of people.
Secondly
, individuals should express themselves by raising their voices, especially about negative things. Because words are powerful, words can be sharp enough to destroy crime and can even be destructive weapon to fight enemies.
In
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During
After
Vietnam war
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the Vietnam war
, it was the voices of international journalists that change the public eyes on the war, which forced the US army to retreat somehow.
Last
 but not least, we express who we are through speeches. We do not need to live up to other’s
expectation or
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expectation, or
 under other’s shadow. Every human being is unique, and we speak up to find
our
reflexive form of "us"
ourselves
 standing in lives. To illustrate
this
 point,
a
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an
 LGBT case is a perfect fit. A boy is always expected to love a girl, but if that guy
feel
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feels
 attracted to the same gender, he should not pretend to be normal but to live with his real choice. In conclusion, we need to encourage people to raise their voices and to be encouraged as well. By
this
 way, I believe our community will be a better place.
Submitted by Thanh on

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