Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals, while other people feel that this is not fair on animals and not necessary. Discuss both views ad give your opinion.

Testing new medicines on animals is increasingly becoming popular these days.
Although
, it is the belief of some people that
clinical trial
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a clinical trial
should be conducted on animals while others
see it unnecessary
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see it as unnecessary
and dangerous.
This
essay will discuss why conducting
clinical trial
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a clinical trial
may be harmful to them, but why at the same time, it is ultimately superior. To being with, the need to test new medicines is relatively dangerous to the health of these animals and it is unnecessary. They are an important creatures that
needs
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need
to be cared for, and not to, perhaps, endanger their lives intentionally.
For instance
, a monkey that was used for clinical trial at the university of Ife, Nigeria, actually died three (3) days after the
procedure
. A dog, in additions,
also
lost her sight after the completion of the same
procedure
at the aforementioned institution. For these reasons, the belief of some people that animals should not be used for
such
procedure
is justified. Using animals for
this
procedure
is,
however
, the best
chioce
the person or thing chosen or selected
choice
as they possessed almost the same body's structure like human begins and some of these medications can
also
be used to treat them whenever they are ill. A very good example of
this
is, a rat that was used to test for the effectiveness of an Antibiotics, after
tested
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testing
tests
test
positive
to
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for
a bacteria infection, of which, it was healed at the end of the exercise. And
besides
, loosing an animal is better than a human being. On these accounts, testing a new
medicines
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medicine
on animals is considerably better.
Finally
, the necessity of testing a new
medicines
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medicine
on animals is obviously supported by some people while others are eventually against it.
This
essay discussed why testing on animals may be dangerous to their health and
unnecessary but
Accept comma addition
unnecessary, but
why it is ultimately the best option.
Submitted by bamidade01 on

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