Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than it's advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
In recent years, owning a
car
has become very essential. Many individuals are of the view that there are more downsides to a car
than upsides. I strongly disagree with this
point of view mainly because the merits such
as easy
Suggestion
easier
transportation
and convinence
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
conveniences
outweights
the demerits be heavier than
outweighs
such
as enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
pollution
and congestion
. This
essay will discuss both the merits and demerits of owning a car
.
There are many major upsides to purchasing a vehicle in recent years. One of the major upside is for easy transportation
. In other words
, a personal means of transportation
is more essential and durable than having to take public transportation
. Imagine, if you will, a family of five traveling
from point A to point B, would move the act of going from one place to another
travelling
easily
in their personal Suggestion
more easily
car
than in public transport. A study carried out in 2018, by the People's Magazine revealed that about 70% of the population today prefer driving to taking public transportation
mainly because of easy commute. Hence
, resulting in less public transportation
. In addition
, this
provides convinence
to individuals as well as families residing within the countryside where public the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
transportation
is minimally available.
However
, there are also
major downsides to this
such
as enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
pollution
and congestion
. One of the major issue
facing our environment today is air Suggestion
issues
pollution
and this
can be caused by smoke from vehciles
which depletes the ozone layer. Take a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
vessels
for example
, the 2019 study carried out by the World's Health Organization which
, suggested that about 60% of the ozone layer has been depleted Accept comma addition
Organization, which
which, is approximately
two times more than in 1990. Suggestion
, which is approximately
Thus
, resulting in major health issues as well as climate changes to the environment. Furthermore
, owning a car
increases congestion
within the society
Suggestion
society, thus
thus
, increasing traffic as well as pollution
.
In conclusion, while there are demerits such
as enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
pollution
and congestion
, there are also
many major benefits to owning a car
which includes, easy transportation
and also
convinence
. If the government would provide automatic cars and the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
also
increase major roads these would go a long way in aiding the depletion of the ozone layer thereby reducing air pollution
and congestion
in major cities and towns.Submitted by lagbaja2000 on
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