Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper?
Society believes that the
news
legitimacy must be subject-oriented. Nowadays, news
comes from various sources like newspapers
and that makes me question their legitimacy. Additionally
, newspapers
are the source of a plethora of literature, making their purposes varied.
The news
nowadays is served for political agenda by some politicians, making the truth questioned. Therefore
, its contents were arranged to make their figures look good in public. Furthermore
, news
contents were made as a tool to take their opponents down. As a consequence
, the news
is likely to serve as a tool or propaganda, rather than as a medium for delivering important events. To give an example, there was a government election that happened recently in Indonesia that was counted by the news
media. However
, on the day where the votes are being counted, some of them are showing a fake quick count of those votes by making a politician win. Thus
, public opinions are being narrated into viewing them as a strong figure. This
is evidence that the news
validity is false.
While
the medium for delivering the news
varied, one of them is the newspapers
. Newspapers
also
served to deliver the job portal in offline mode, making it very useful. In addition
, newspapers
also
can be used by people who want to sell their used goods. For example
, in 2017, newspapers
from Kompas were advertising various jobs. A further
illustration is from recently when it became a trending topic among netizens because some antiques that could not be found on the internet are being sold there. Both events are evidence that newspapers
have various content that makes them very useful for societies.
In general, I believe that news
nowadays serves as politicians’ tools for making them more powerful and it also
can be found in the newspaper. Nevertheless
, newspapers
also
have a plethora of content, making them also
useful for general purposes. Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news
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task achievement
While the essay addresses both parts of the prompt, the argument about the truthfulness of news could be developed further with more specific examples or evidence. This would make the response more comprehensive.
coherence cohesion
Work on improving the logical flow between each paragraph. For example, transition sentences between ideas and paragraphs can help the reader follow your argument more easily.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each main point within your paragraphs is well-supported and clearly linked back to the overall argument. This will strengthen the coherence of your essay.
task achievement
The essay provides a clear stance on the issue by stating that news can be used as a political tool and argues for the various functions of newspapers.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion effectively frame the essay, giving it a complete structure.
task achievement
Specific examples are provided, making the arguments more tangible and relatable. However, these examples could be more elaborated to add depth to the essay.
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