Some people think that we can use as much fresh water as we want. Others think that fresh water supply should be controlled strictly by governments as the sources are limited. Discuss both and give your opinion.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

It is certain that the use of fresh

water

Use synonyms

can bifurcate people based on their opposing views. While some people think that

water

Use synonyms

usage should be infinite, I think some restrictions on the consumption can help countries save for the upcoming problems from global warming. One of the significant

factor

Suggestion

factors

that people think is

water

Use synonyms

is a natural resource and everybody has the right to consume it as per they want.

This

Linking Words

is because,

water

Use synonyms

is required for almost every human survival

tasks

Suggestion

task, such

task such

such

Linking Words

as cooking, washing, cleaning clothes and various things.

For example

Linking Words

, a family of 10-15 people will require more

water

Use synonyms

than the normal small families and restricted distribution can cause inconvenience to

such

Linking Words

families. As a consequence,

this

Linking Words

can lead to the stress environment between the people with different

water

Use synonyms

needs.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, those who think fresh

water

Use synonyms

should be used in limits agree that fresh

water

Use synonyms

is very precious. By which

them

people in general

they

mean, global warming induced reduced on no rains in different regions is causing

water

Use synonyms

scarcity.

Hence

Linking Words

, it becomes

top-most priority

Suggestion

a topmost priority

topmost priority

of the authorities to make sure whatever reserved

water

Use synonyms

they have, should be distributed with caution. To describe, the government can ban or control use of fresh

water

Use synonyms

wasted during shooting

of films particularly

Suggestion

of films, particularly

during the rain scenes.

This

Linking Words

act can save the lives of hundreds of families who may suffer from the

water

Use synonyms

shortage. In conclusion,

although

Linking Words

limiting the usage of fresh

water

Use synonyms

can cause discomfort to some people, I strongly feel

this

Linking Words

controlled release of fresh

water

Use synonyms

can help authorities to save and be prepared for global warming effects that may hamper human survival.

This

Linking Words

action is very much needed looking at the way

reserviors

civilians trained as soldiers but not part of the regular army

reserves

of the fresh

water

Use synonyms

are depleting with coming time.

Submitted by vishwayani7 on Fri May 10 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

294 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
task 2 :In many countries, young people are granted certain privileges and responsibilities at the age of sixteen. Clearly parents have a responsibility to both care for and prepare their children as they approach this important milestone. To what degree should parents intervene in the lives of their 14-15 year-old children?
As children grow older, they can be more responsible in the things they do themselves. But when they have not yet reached adulthood, parents still have the responsibility to educate them. In this article, I will present ideas about how parents should control their teenage children.
5.5
band
You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite a close friend to stay with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: invite him to stay and suggest a date briefly describe the new house and garden say why you like your new house.
Hi, how are you? I hope you are doing well and everything is good for you. I feel gorgeous, when we see the last moment.
5
band
You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include: - Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. - Polite. No one responds to insults. - Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen? - Firmness. You want to be taken seriously.
I am writing to inform you about my terrible experience in your restaurant which is located at the George Street, Mumbai.
6
band
chools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Every student in schools and universities use computer for learning a new information, search answers at their questions about topic that they do not really understand and just do homework online in text editor like MC Word. Next, I will say about advantages and disadvantages about computers like part of education.
5
band
Some people think the government should provide free housing, while others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A large number of humans assume the authority have to provide free housing, meanwhile others trust that it is not the government's responsibility.On my prespective housing should be responsibility by the individuals. My assumption on both of views will be disscused in this essay.

Some people think that we can use as much fresh water as we want. Others think that fresh water supply should be controlled strictly by governments as the sources are limited. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite a close friend to stay with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: invite him to stay and suggest a date briefly describe the new house and garden say why you like your new house.

chools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think the government should provide free housing, while others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.