Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In recent years, advance technology has greatly increased. Many individuals share the view that computers
has improved
Suggestion
have improved
the quality of
life
while others are of the opinion that they have made
life
more difficult. I am of the opinion that they have improved
life
qualities mainly because
this
technology has reduced
work
load in different
work
sectors, as well as, improved studying among students. There are two major reasons how computers have improved
life
quality.
Firstly
,
Retriving
get or find back; recover the use of
retrieving
information in
work
places has become less stressful.
In other words
, storing and
retriving
get or find back; recover the use of
retrieving
data has never been more easier. Take
for example
, a hospital with well over 5,000 outpatients, bringing patient's record would be harder without the
use
of computers whereas with the
use
of
such
devices patient information is easily accessible with less time required.
Hence
,
use
Suggestion
the use
of these devices
has in
Accept comma addition
has, in
recent times made
work
more bearable than difficult.
Secondly
, university colleges, as well as,
grammer
the branch of linguistics that deals with syntax and morphology (and sometimes also deals with semantics)
grammar
schools have employed the
use
of these devices, which, has reduced and improve efficiency among students.
For example
, a study, carried out in 2017, by the National Open University, showed that about 70% of students in computer using schools performed approximately 10 times better than those without computers.
This
was mainly because, these devices helped in making reading
more easier
Suggestion
easier
for students,
thus
, making
life
more relaxing and bearable. In conclusion, these devices have made
life
more beneficial and profitable, as well as, productive, rather than, complicated and
this
is mainly because increase data storage and
retrival
(computer science) the operation of accessing information from the computer's memory
retrieval
.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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