In the modern world, there are no longer necessary to use food from animals or products from animals such as medicine and clothing. Agree or disagree.

We have witnessed many animals being used and even killed to meet human need of food, clothes and medicine. Some people believe that in the near future, animals will no longer be essential for our products. To a certain degree, I agree that these products can be
replace
Suggestion
replaced
by
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with
synthetic ones in
clothing industry
Suggestion
the clothing industry
;
however
, I would argue that human still
need
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needs
animals for food and medical research. On the one hand, we did find many alternatives to avoid using animals.
First
and foremost, modern science has invented substitute meats that taste like real ones but were made from soybean.
This
innovation allows people
such
as vegans to remain their current while still have enough
nutritents
any substance that can be metabolized by an animal to give energy and build tissue
nutrients
they need.
Secondly
, the utilize of animals are decreasing rapidly, which is very fortunate.
Last
but not least, using animals in producing clothes has no longer been integral since scientists developed alternative materials that are adequate for our need.
For instance
, we now can use synthetic fur and synthetic silk that
are
Suggestion
is
as good as the real ones and can even stay intact for a longer period than what from animals.
On the other hand
, it is nearly inconceivable to stop using animals. White meat and red meat are parts of many traditional
cuisine
Suggestion
cuisines
over the world.
For example
, India cannot could
curry
move while supporting, either in a vehicle or in one's hands or on one's body
carry
with the absence of chicken of beef.
Additionally
, some specific protein and minerals can only be found in animals; thereby avoiding meat from animals thoroughly will make some people fail to approach adequate
nutritens
(physiology) the organic process of nourishing or being nourished; the processes by which an organism assimilates food and uses it for growth and maintenance
nutrition
nutrients
.
Likewise
, the use of animals in medical research
is being lessen
Suggestion
has lessened
as much as scientists can.
Nevertheless
, for the time being, yet there is no proper alternatives so we still have to utilize animals in these fields. In conclusion, it is no doubt true that animals will be unnecessary in some particular areas like clothes;
however
, I believe we still need animals to meet our
nutritents
any substance that can be metabolized by an animal to give energy and build tissue
nutrient
requirement or performing medical research.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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