Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while other thinks is has disadvantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Sport is an important part of healthy
life
and nowadays it is connected to marketing strategies, most of the companies use as a tool in order to endorse their products. The majority of the population thinks that it is a great thing to increase particular products sells, boost stock values and overall revenue in terms of the company’s prospect. Use synonyms
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, others believe that it has a tremendous drawback in relation Linking Words
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consumers. In my opinion, definitely, it will impose negative aspects that might affect general people.
A sport plays a vital role in everyone’s Suggestion
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life
; recent marketing trends are changing radically in the sports industry because it is used as a marketing medium to sell products or services. Most of Use synonyms
people
love sports, they stimulated to buy products/services and the companies use Suggestion
the people
this
thing as a tool to promote their products by backing sports events. Linking Words
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IPL
Cricket matches are one of the most famous game events in India, which is organized every year in Use synonyms
month
of spring. Around 90% of Indian companies sponsor Suggestion
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IPL
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sell
which ultimately increase their revenues and financial prospects.
your consciousness of your own identity
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On the other hand
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life
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this
case, people who are interested in sports will spend a huge amount of money on things related to sports they love and those we can count as un-necessary expenditure. Linking Words
For instance
, according to a survey reported by the BBC news regarding general population spending in one month of Linking Words
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matches in 2018. The results were pretty shocking as people spend around 40% extra money as compared to other Use synonyms
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expenses on things, which are connected with the Cricket. They are buying those all just because it is endorsed by their favourite team or a player and all Suggestion
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teams including
players are sponsored by local or international firms.
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hike sports
as well as company stocks. Accept comma addition
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Nevertheless
, in my opinion, it has too much downside in terms of the general public. It is simply a mind-diversion of Linking Words
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