Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while other thinks is has disadvantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Sport is an important part of healthy

life

and nowadays it is connected to marketing strategies, most of the companies use as a tool in order to endorse their products. The majority of the population thinks that it is a great thing to increase particular products sells, boost stock values and overall revenue in terms of the company’s prospect.

However

, others believe that it has a tremendous drawback in relation

with

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consumers. In my opinion, definitely, it will impose negative aspects that might affect general people. A sport plays a vital role in everyone’s

life

; recent marketing trends are changing radically in the sports industry because it is used as a marketing medium to sell products or services. Most of

people

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the people

love sports, they stimulated to buy products/services and the companies use

this

thing as a tool to promote their products by backing sports events.

For example

IPL

Cricket matches are one of the most famous game events in India, which is organized every year in

month

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the month

of spring. Around 90% of Indian companies sponsor

IPL

matches and displays their products/services in order to boost their

sell

your consciousness of your own identity

self

which ultimately increase their revenues and financial prospects.

On the other hand

, sponsoring sports events will encourage people to purchase things which they rarely use in daily

life

. In

this

case, people who are interested in sports will spend a huge amount of money on things related to sports they love and those we can count as un-necessary expenditure.

For instance

, according to a survey reported by the BBC news regarding general population spending in one month of

IPL

matches in 2018. The results were pretty shocking as people spend around 40% extra money as compared to other

months

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months'

expenses on things, which are connected with the Cricket. They are buying those all just because it is endorsed by their favourite team or a player and all

IPL

teams including

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teams, including

players are sponsored by local or international firms. In conclusion, sponsoring sports will definitely

hike sports

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hike, sports

as well as company stocks.

Nevertheless

, in my opinion, it has too much downside in terms of the general public. It is simply a mind-diversion of

people which

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people, which

is encouraging them to buy services/products they really don’t need in daily

life

scenarios.

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Sports sponsorship
financial support
athletes
brand visibility
awareness
commercialization
integrity
dependencies
corporate funds
unethical practices
strategic partnerships
communal relations
promote healthy lifestyles

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