some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it give a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

Being wealthy is considered a necessity for most individuals.

However

, it is often argued that, the main reason why people seek to be financially buoyant, is because it affords them the chance to impact the

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

life

of others. I completely agree with

this

point of view, because of two main reasons which will be discussed in

this

essay.

To begin

with, assisting individuals in need, with money helps the wealthy person achieve a sense of

fulfillment

a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires

fulfilment

. Many thanks to be happy and to derive pleasure in whatever they engage themselves in;

such

is the case of so many

philanthropist

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philanthropists

. The help the needy, not just for personal gain, but because they feel fulfilled by lifting burdens

off

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of

people

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person's

neck and putting smiles on their faces.

This

is not just seeking recognition or approval, rather it is perceived a way of life to them.

For instance

, the national newspaper documented a successful business icon, who on a monthly

basis donate

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basis, donate

relief material to victims of war, at the internally displaced camps; he said he feels happy doing

such

.

Therefore

, helping the needy is a way to derive pleasure and

fulfillment

a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires

fulfilment

for the rich.

Furthermore

, when assisting the poor financially, it makes the world a better place to live. Poverty has been a driving force, and the culprit implicated as the cause of several social vices

such

as theft, prostitution and hooliganism.

Therefore

, When these poor people

are rendered

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have rendered

render

financial aid, it helps to limit their level of indulgence in

this

anti-social

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behaviour

.

This

promote

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promotes

peace and love in the environment,

therefore

, the world becomes a better and safe place to habituate.

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Due

to the high level of assistance in

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the form

of grants in developed countries

such

as the UK, uses help to improve the literacy level, as opposed to the high percent of

illitetate

not able to read or write

illiterate

that is

rampant in developing and underdeveloped Nations. In conclusion, when a person is

opportuned

of great significance or value

important

to be in possession of riches and sufficient money, helping

others especially

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others, especially

the poor and needy should be considered a priority.

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This

does not only brings social

recognization

the state or quality of being recognized or acknowledged

recognition

and respect in the community, it

also

helps you feel for

freed

excessive desire to acquire or possess more (especially more material wealth) than one needs or deserves

greed

and makes the world feel better abode for everyone