some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it give a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

Being wealthy is considered a necessity for most individuals.
However
, it is often argued that, the main reason why people seek to be financially buoyant, is because it affords them the chance to impact the
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
of others. I completely agree with
this
point of view, because of two main reasons which will be discussed in
this
essay.
To begin
with, assisting individuals in need, with money helps the wealthy person achieve a sense of
fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
. Many thanks to be happy and to derive pleasure in whatever they engage themselves in;
such
is the case of so many
philanthropist
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philanthropists
. The help the needy, not just for personal gain, but because they feel fulfilled by lifting burdens
off
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of
people
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person's
neck and putting smiles on their faces.
This
is not just seeking recognition or approval, rather it is perceived a way of life to them.
For instance
, the national newspaper documented a successful business icon, who on a monthly
basis donate
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basis, donate
relief material to victims of war, at the internally displaced camps; he said he feels happy doing
such
.
Therefore
, helping the needy is a way to derive pleasure and
fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
for the rich.
Furthermore
, when assisting the poor financially, it makes the world a better place to live. Poverty has been a driving force, and the culprit implicated as the cause of several social vices
such
as theft, prostitution and hooliganism.
Therefore
, When these poor people
are rendered
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have rendered
render
financial aid, it helps to limit their level of indulgence in
this
anti-social
behaviours
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behaviour
.
This
promote
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promotes
peace and love in the environment,
therefore
, the world becomes a better and safe place to habituate.
due
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Due
to the high level of assistance in
form
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the form
of grants in developed countries
such
as the UK, uses help to improve the literacy level, as opposed to the high percent of
illitetate
not able to read or write
illiterate
that is
rampant in developing and underdeveloped Nations. In conclusion, when a person is
opportuned
of great significance or value
important
to be in possession of riches and sufficient money, helping
others especially
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others, especially
the poor and needy should be considered a priority.
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This
does not only brings social
recognization
the state or quality of being recognized or acknowledged
recognition
and respect in the community, it
also
helps you feel for
freed
excessive desire to acquire or possess more (especially more material wealth) than one needs or deserves
greed
and makes the world feel better abode for everyone

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