Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is a dilemma between selecting the present
situation
or attempting to close it to our ideal. Some people believe that living in the current
situation
make
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makes
everybody happier,
however
, the others opine accepting the bad
situation
makes the worse. In the scope of
this
essay, I try to convince it is our duty to make the
situation
better and struggle with the problems. At
first
, it should be noticed that the
life
not white nor black, we live in
gray
of an achromatic color of any lightness intermediate between the extremes of white and black
grey
conditions. If we consider a bad
situation
as black or dark
gray
of an achromatic color of any lightness intermediate between the extremes of white and black
grey
,
then
I think nobody is attracted to
this
. Staying in
bad
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bad situations
a bad situation
situation
is same as being in the limbo, you would not know anything about your future and even the present.
Besides
, sometimes
life
decides for us. Imagine a fresh graduated who aims to continue his study but needs money. In
this
condition he should do whatever to just
warn
earn on some commercial or business transaction; earn as salary or wages
earn
some
money but
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money, but
this
does not
last
too much. On the other side is light
gray
of an achromatic color of any lightness intermediate between the extremes of white and black
grey
. I believe that everybody must do his best to live close to white.
Again imagine
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Again, imagine
that student after several years of hardship, achieving the goal of
PhD
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the PhD
and finding a better position leads him from dark to light
gray
of an achromatic color of any lightness intermediate between the extremes of white and black
grey
. I am asking you that what do you think if the person was satisfied of his conditions? Remaining in the bad
situation
make him depressed.
Although
, he endured lots of hardship in his
route but
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route, but
at
last
he is confident that future
life
is simpler that past. At
last
, accepting a bad
situation
is like a suicide while efforts to change it is too difficult. The result of the attempts makes the difference which most of the people are trying to change their
life
by improving the
life
conditions.
Submitted by Masud on

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