Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

The natural sources problem and environmental issues
are directly influence
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are directly influencing
directly influence
are directly influenced
have directly influenced
our level of lives and health,
therefore
, they should be considered extremely important to all individuals. Some people opine that the extinction of natural resources
such
as animals and
plant
in the most important issue while others believe that the environmental problems are more serious. In the scope of
this
essay, I try to discuss both ideas and write about mine. Considering the researches in
this
area, there are more than millions of animal and
plant
species
were lost as human started the industrial era. Those who believe that the problem is
this
, have restricted observations.
For instance
, modern agriculture destroyed
large area
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large areas
a large area
in amazon just to grow more cacao,
as a result
,
this
affected the living
condition
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conditions
of different kind of monkeys who nourished from the natural plants there which were totally ruined.
Therefore
, they must have immigrated to smaller region and due to increase in population in smaller
region
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regional
the fights were started and lots of them were killed by their
species
to survive others. Others believed that,
climate
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the climate
there are more important problems. Issues
such
as climate change
affected
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affects
the environment more than lacking animal and
plant
species
. Consider that happened
in
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after
between
amazon. By the industrial agriculture, hundreds of acres of
rainy
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rain
forest were dried. Amazon jungle as the most important source of oxygen maker
on
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of
the earth was
shrinked
decrease in size, range, or extent
shrunk
,
hence
, an unbelievable amount of carbon dioxide increased because of
lack
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the lack
a lack
of source of trees to convert them to O2. As the CO2 amount increased, the greenhouse effect became more serious and the earth temperature grew.
This
sets
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set
of jeopardies could easily cause the extinction of different
species
. I do agree with the
second
opinion due to the vast effect in comparison to
first
one. Another reason is that, a little change in climate in a small region can cause a huge impression on
whole planet
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the whole planet
in short time. To sun up, both sets of people are
concern
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concerned
about the future of
world
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the world
. The
first
group believed that loss of
plant
and animals are the most important aspect of environmental issues while others insisted there are more important reasons that affects the extinctions which should be noticed severely.
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