Nowadays, many medical research projects are carried out by private companies. In your opinion, do you think that the research should be carried out by the individual, private companies or by the government?

Recently, most of the research and development in the medical field
is carried
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are carried
out in
private sector
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the private sector
. In my opinion,
this
should be discouraged as there is increased risk of unethical practices with private companies.
Instead
, government should take a leading role in researching key issues in medicine. Private enterprises have always been in the limelight for all the wrong
reasons especially
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reasons, especially
while dealing with sensitive topics like
health
and
defense
(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
. These companies, whose main agenda is profits, will always sponsor research which will fill up their
cofers
an ornamental sunken panel in a ceiling or dome
coffers
.
As a result
, rare diseases and infectious disease which mainly affects the poor is under researched area in medical science.
For instance
, private projects spent millions of dollars on treatment of acne rather than on
signficant
important in effect or meaning
significant
health
concern
such
as tuberculosis or HIV. Another major concern with
reserch
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
in private enterprises is the obvious conflict of interest. There is always a tendency to report spurious or
fundged
furnished with funds
funded
fudged
up positive data on new drugs in industry sponsored trials.
Moreover
, serious side effects are not disclosed resulting in serious
health
consequences to consumers. Despite knowing the risk of
teratogencity
with Thalidomide, researchers purposefully hid the above fact which resulted in severe
cogential
anomalies in babies of mother who took thalidomide during their
pregancy
the state of being pregnant; the period from conception to birth when a woman carries a developing fetus in her uterus
pregnancy
. To conclude, research in
health
must be the
perogative
a right reserved exclusively by a particular person or group (especially a hereditary or official right)
prerogative
of the government bodies in order to focus it on realistic and major concerns.

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