An increasing number of people are buying what they need online • What are the advantages and disadvantages of both Indivisual and companies for shopping online

• . The trend of online shopping is at peak now a days
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Obviously, it is advantageous for people and companies,
however
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both of them have certain reservations regarding on net buying and selling of products.
Firstly
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accounting
indivisual
a human being
individual
advantages, people can have
greater variety
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a greater variety
of products available online
in contrast
to those displayed in city outlets,
consequently
, they can easily get their desired product.
Secondly
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online shopping is much more
convinient
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convenient
as we don’t need to go from shop to shop
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instead
we can simply search things online
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book them and have them on our
door step
the sill of a door; a horizontal piece of wood or stone that forms the bottom of a doorway and offers support when passing through a doorway
doorstep
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In addition
, companies are
also
getting benefits from online selling as they can attract more and more customers online
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Furthermore
, these online companies get
oppertunity
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the opportunity
opportunity
an opportunity
to trade
globally which
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globally, which
help them to get more popularity and gain more profit.
In contrast
, there are certain drawbacks of online shopping at individual level
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Uncertainity
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Uncertainty
Uncertainties
about the quality of
ordered
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ordering
product is the major obstacle in path of online
shoping
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
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For instance
, sizes and colours of clothes are mostly different from the ordered ones,
in addition
to
this
quality of product often found below average. Another problem is long period required
in
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on
delivery of online shopped products
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Most of the orders are misplaced or too late to reach in time when required. Online selling companies are
also
facing various challenges
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Firstly most
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Firstly, most
of on net business companies are unable to satisfy their customers
inspite
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in spite
of their tireless efforts and offering best of their customer services
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Secondly
, large amount of finances and
man power
the force of workers available
manpower
is required for maintaining and updating online websites with
correct and timely transfer
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the correct and timely transfer
of shipments. In conclusion, online marketing have good set of advantages for both buyers and sellers,
however
, there are
few shortcomings
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a few shortcomings
that can be improved in order to provide best online services.
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