There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperature rising? How should we deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experiences or knowledge

  Global warming has become a public health

problem

as

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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

effects are deleterious to all life forms. Sadly,

this

problem

of increasing worldwide temperature is caused solely by man's activities. The two major man-made causes of

this

issue are the use of fossil fuels for

energy

and deforestation. There are a variety of ways to tackle

this

controversial issue,

however

, in my opinion, conversion to renewable sources of

energy

and planting of trees or preservation of green life in general will prove effective.        

First

and foremost, industrialization brought about the advancement of the modern

world but

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world, but

also

the continuous emission of dangerous pollutants into the

earth

's atmosphere. For centuries, coal and other fossil fuels have been used to generate

energy

for our daily activities. Experts have shown that these gases are responsible for the elevation of the

earth

's core temperature as they cause depletion of the protective covering of the

earth

called the ozone layer which counteracts the greenhouse effect. To solve

this

problem

, governments globally should place an embargo on the use of fossil fuels as

energy

.

Funds

Suggestion

The funds

should go to the research and development of other forms of reusable

energy

such

as water and nuclear power.

This

will allow for healing of the ozone layer since the factors causing

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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

destruction would have been eliminated.    

Secondly

, as the population of humans

increase so

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increase, so

is the need for more space for housing and other infrastructures.

This

has led to a vast depletion of the trees that are responsible for clearing out the

earth

's air.

Furthermore

, the

trees especially

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trees, especially

in the

artic

extremely cold

arctic

attic

arts

region help to preserve the

permafrost which

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permafrost, which

keeps the core temperature cool.

Abscence

Suggestion

The absence

Absence

of

this

causes a rise in temperatures with resultant melting of the polar ice caps. To deal with

this

, areas where deforestations have already taken place should

commemce

take the first step or steps in carrying out an action

commence

tree planting drives.

For example

, there are countries where community service for minor infractions are done by planting at least 500 trees. Government should

also

make policies that ensure incorporation of nature and trees into works and housing plans.    In conclusion, the biggest challenge of

this

generation might as well be global warming. It is the culmination of the effects of man's activities

such

as burning fuels and cutting down trees. I believe that changing to alternative forms of

energy

and worldwide planting of trees can help solve

this

problem

.