There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperature rising? How should we deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experiences or knowledge

  Global warming has become a public health

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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

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effects are deleterious to all life forms. Sadly,

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problem

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of increasing worldwide temperature is caused solely by man's activities. The two major man-made causes of

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issue are the use of fossil fuels for

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and deforestation. There are a variety of ways to tackle

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controversial issue,

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, in my opinion, conversion to renewable sources of

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and planting of trees or preservation of green life in general will prove effective.        

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and foremost, industrialization brought about the advancement of the modern

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world, but

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the continuous emission of dangerous pollutants into the

earth

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's atmosphere. For centuries, coal and other fossil fuels have been used to generate

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for our daily activities. Experts have shown that these gases are responsible for the elevation of the

earth

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's core temperature as they cause depletion of the protective covering of the

earth

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called the ozone layer which counteracts the greenhouse effect. To solve

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problem

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, governments globally should place an embargo on the use of fossil fuels as

energy

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.

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The funds

should go to the research and development of other forms of reusable

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as water and nuclear power.

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will allow for healing of the ozone layer since the factors causing

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destruction would have been eliminated.    

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, as the population of humans

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increase, so

is the need for more space for housing and other infrastructures.

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has led to a vast depletion of the trees that are responsible for clearing out the

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's air.

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, the

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trees, especially

in the

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extremely cold

arctic

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region help to preserve the

permafrost which

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permafrost, which

keeps the core temperature cool.

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causes a rise in temperatures with resultant melting of the polar ice caps. To deal with

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, areas where deforestations have already taken place should

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take the first step or steps in carrying out an action

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tree planting drives.

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, there are countries where community service for minor infractions are done by planting at least 500 trees. Government should

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make policies that ensure incorporation of nature and trees into works and housing plans.    In conclusion, the biggest challenge of

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generation might as well be global warming. It is the culmination of the effects of man's activities

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as burning fuels and cutting down trees. I believe that changing to alternative forms of

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and worldwide planting of trees can help solve

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problem

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