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some believe studying alone is better and while some others believe group study is far good. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people say that the group studies are far more effective than studying alone, while few others argue that it is the other way around.
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 essay will discuss both the views and provides my opinion. Group studies provide some significant advantages, I believe it is the fun way to
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 and a student will be able to cover
wide range
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a wide range
 of topics in a short period of
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, a meaningful discussion on any concept or a subject will help them to understand it better and at the same
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, it
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 improves their communication skills too.
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, there is a
down side
a negative aspect of something that is generally positive
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 to
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 method, kids might get distracted easily and may not
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 at all.
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, I did many group sessions in which me and my friends learnt a lot together and shared our tips and tricks, while there were some instances where we absolutely wasted the precious
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. So, it can go both ways. Studying alone too has its own pros and cons, a child can concentrate on the
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 for extended periods of
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 without any major distractions. But, if he/she is facing difficulty in understanding something, there will be no one around to help and in some cases, it can be boring to
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 alone.
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, I did learn on my own many times in the past, sometimes it really helped me to achieve the desired grades and in some cases I did not get what I expected. To conclude, each way of studying has its own benefits and disadvantages. Striking the right balance between them will help the students to excel in their academics.
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