The government is spending a lot of money to discover life in other planets some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money Addressing problems of public To what extent do you agree and disagree.

It is commonly believed that pouring a lot of the governmental resources to unravel universe is an absolute waste of them,
however
they better be utilized for public welfare. I agree that
bulk
Suggestion
the bulk
of the governmental finances should be directed to meet basic needs of society, but I
also
consider
space
exploration as a significant scientific pursuit.
To begin
,
government
should spend generously to contribute to
public good
Suggestion
the public good
rather than discovering the unknown. The
space
exploration is
highly expansive project
Suggestion
a highly expansive project
the highly expansive project
that needs huge investment
hence
, developing countries like us better direct their finances to improve living standards, as we are lacking in basics like clothing, food, education and employment
.
Accept space
.
In the present
challeges
take exception to
challenges
,
Accept space
,
it is the need of the
government
to funnel tax payers money to more down- to- earth projects. Reforms should be introduced which are crucial to
welfare
Suggestion
the welfare
of society
such
as free education and economical
health
care.
For example
, Imran khan introduced
health
program in 2011 in Pakistan in which poor people were provided with
health
cards to seek free
health
care. And
government
was supposed to pay on their behalf.
On the other hand
, acquiring the knowledge of
universe
Suggestion
the universe
hold
Suggestion
holds
a significant importance in fields of sciences.
Firstly
, by launching satellites
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
space
scientists are able to uncover the remarkable Knowledge about weather and
secondly they
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secondly, they
can predict survival conditions on other
space
bodies.
This
is helpful in one way as we predict the bad weather disasters before hand and can make preventions and
furthermore
,
incase
Suggestion
in case
when all the earth resources will deplete and population will exceed the earth capacity we will have a chance to migrate
to an another
Suggestion
on to another
to on another
planet with survival
facillities
.
For instance
, NASA launched a satellite
on
Suggestion
of
to
Mars in 2008 to collect information, on return it provided us the facts that there were signs of life and
presence
Suggestion
the presence
of human survival gasses.
Hence through
Accept comma addition
Hence, through
space
exploration we
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exploration, we
are able to know much about the universe. To conclude,
government
Suggestion
the government
on his
first
hand should try to provide basic facilities to
public
Suggestion
the public
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
this
is much
important
Suggestion
more important
,
then
pour money for
space
ventures as its
second
priority.
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