Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The environment and climatic impact are changing the human life significantly in
form
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the form
of a draught, excessive rain and extreme weather conditions. While these effects are at a macro level and required a larger
efforts
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effort
to address it, we need to see the action at
individual level
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the individual level
an individual level
.
This
essay will discuss about the role of the governments, large companies and individuals can play in restricting the climate change. A natural changes are mainly driven due to an action and modern lifestyle adopted by the
people which
Accept comma addition
people, which
are mainly driven on an
accessive
beyond normal limits
excessive
consuption
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
and leaving behind
larger carbon foot print
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a larger carbon footprint
larger carbon footprint
.
For example
, use of the plastic material in the daily life which results
into
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in
a larger waste mountain in the urban outskirts. Another instance, use of unstained electric appliances which releases
green house gas
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greenhouse gases
greenhouse gas
a greenhouse gas
and result in an
ozon
a colorless gas (O3) soluble in alkalis and cold water; a strong oxidizing agent; can be produced by electric discharge in oxygen or by the action of ultraviolet radiation on oxygen in the stratosphere (where it acts as a screen for ultraviolet radiation)
ozone
ocean
layer
damange
the occurrence of a change for the worse
damage
. These all
leads
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lead
to higher temperature and adverse natural activities. So the actions of individual are
strongely
with strength or in a strong manner
strongly
strangely
affects
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affecting
the overall nature and
sustainable
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sustains
daily life will help in addressing it. A climate change is a global
phenoman
any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning
phenomenon
phenomena
with
unnatureal
in accordance with nature; relating to or concerning nature
natural
unnatural
activity with global companies or economies have to play an important role.
For example
, developed countries like USA, having a
highest
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higher
high
consuption
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
conception
conceptions
of
natureal
in accordance with nature; relating to or concerning nature
natural
resources and leads to higher emission of the
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
gases. A national level policy and programmes need to be designed for long term commitment to address the issue.
For instance
, United Nations efforts on making all
nation
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nations
to sign the treaty to reduce carbon emission.
This
clearly shows that we need to have a global
efforts
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effort
to address it. In conclusion, I
am disagree
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disagree
with the given statement and believe that an
individuals
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individual
have a plethora of way to challenge the climate change and improve his personal lifestyle to make
positive impact
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a positive impact
. We need to motivate and support
such
initiative at a large scale.
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