Do you think children should be given freedom to do whatever they want or parents should impose restrictions on them.

It is undoubtedly true that freedom of choice is an imperative thing for the psychological well being of a society.Some
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
argue that children should strictly follow the rules set by their parents.
However
, I firmly believe that children should be given liberty so that they can make their own preferences and explore the world.
First
and foremost, children should be given freedom in making decisions for themselves.It will improve their decision making skills as well as transform them into confident mature adults.
Moreover
,
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,
the habit of choosing one particular option among several others, will
not them
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not, then
not then
perplexed and double minded while dealing with a plethora of choices in adult life.The jury members of the Supreme court of Japan,
for instance
, in their interviews attributed their
descion
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
making skills to their childhood experiences.They
further
told that they were never pressed by their parents and always followed their own dreams.
Secondly
, children learn best by exploring things and experimentations.
Therefore restrictions
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Therefore, restrictions
will hinder their skills and abilities.They would never be able to know their potential unless given liberty.
Furthermore
,
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,
adventurous and curious nature of a child, always provokes him to try new things as well as
provides
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provided
providing
him a better understanding of
world
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the world
.The musicians
of
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from
Hollywood renowned for their creativity
,
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,
for example
, interviewed and described that they explored their talents by following their personal choices and studied music
instead
of
sciences
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the sciences
.Now they are working passionately and enjoying it. In conclusion, I opine that parents should not be a hurdle for their children to pursue their dreams,
instead
they should accept children's preferences and guide them
accordingly
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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