In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In a few nations, there is an increased trend among people to follow a
vegan
diet
.
This
essay argues that
health benefits
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the health benefits
of being a vegetarian far
outweighs
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outweigh
the minor disadvantage of not having enough options while travelling. Following a plant based
diet
can be disadvantageous during the travel to a foreign country as people have a few choices.
That
is say
Suggestion
is to say
people who are strict vegetarian have to face problems due to lack of varieties available during their stay abroad.
This
is especially true for the regions where animal based products are a preferred option.
For instance
, one of my friends who eats only pure
vegan
food had to face a challenging time during her visit to Vietnam as most of the restaurants did not provide any vegetarian cuisine.
However
,
this
problem can be avoided if a person does an extensive research about places which offer
vegan
meals before travelling. The obvious advantage of being a vegetarian is that it is much healthier
comparitively
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comparable
comparatively
compared
comparison
to meat based food products and reduces the risk of various diseases.
That is
to say
vegan
meals are rich in nutrients, fibre and
antioxidants which
Accept comma addition
antioxidants, which
help controlling a person's weight and in turn, prevent people from becoming an obese and other health risks associated with it.
For example
, as per research by
Ohio Health Foundation
Suggestion
the Ohio Health Foundation
, people who eat
plant based
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a plant based diet
diet
have a 50 % reduced risk of a heart attack and diabetes. I believe that
this
makes eating vegetarian food worthwhile and eclipses all drawbacks of not having adequate choices during travelling. In conclusion, In my opinion, people can have a good health by following a vegetarian
diet
and
this
advantage overshadows the disadvantage of not having enough varieties of vegetarian meals during travel.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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