Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give your own opinion and examples based on your experience

We live in a fast-paced world and films are considered our biggest source of entertainment. Some people prefer to watch movies through different electronic gadgets, while others opine that watching them in movie theatres is an entirely different experience. From my point of view, watching films in cinemas is extremely amusing and healthier since using mobiles for
this
purpose,
although
being cheaper, entails some health issues. On the one hand, the technical advancement of mobile phones and the new smart privilege has lured many people to watch films on them. Admittedly, it is very convenient and time saving!
For example
, you can have a nice film while commuting to work rather than spending a whole night to go out.
Moreover
, it is much cheaper to download different and numerous movies on your phone, as not only you have to pay for the high-priced ticket of cinemas, but
also
you do for transportation, popcorn and other leisure items.
On the other hand
, watching movies on
silver screen
Suggestion
the silver screen
is a big enjoyment.
This
is primarily due to the better perception via enormous screens and sound systems.
For instance
, many people complain of the bad quality of pirated computer films.
Furthermore
, many health problems have been reported from spending long hours using tabs and smart phones,
such
as eye strain and stiffness of neck and shoulders. In conclusion,
although
using our phones to watch films is incredible as for time and money saving, I believe that it would entail some health problems, lower quality and a less-pleasurable experience.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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