There are many extinct animal species in the world. Some people think we should protect animals from dying out, while others believe we should spend more time on problems of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Although
some people think that various
species
of
wildlife
should be protected from extinction, others,
however
, are of the opinion that human needs should be of utmost priority. In my opinion, I consider that the importance of protecting various animal
species
cannot be overemphasized as
this
would help to preserve the
ecosystem
and at the same time provide leisure for humans. On the one hand, some people reckon that, protection of the various
species
of animals should be of top priority and I agree.
Firstly
, the
ecosystem
, which
also
included plant
species
, is
intavc
constituting the undiminished entirety; lacking nothing essential especially not damaged
intact
if the wreck less killings of
wildlife
is prohibited
Suggestion
are prohibited
.
For example
, animal dungs help to enrich the soil needed by plants to grow.
Hence
, the richer the soil the healthier plants will grow thereby preventing extinction of these
plants
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plant
species
.
In addition
, animals mostly feed on plant products, which are preserved by an enriched soil.
Consequently
, the
ecosystem
, which includes plant and animal cycles, is preserved. Another reason why animal
species
must be protected is that, they serve as a source of leisure for man. The zoo comprises of different
species
of
wildlife
and
this
serves as a means of
tourists'
Suggestion
tourist
attraction thereby
Accept comma addition
attraction, thereby
offering the leisure needed by humans to have a balanced social life.
On the other hand
, others are of the opinion that human needs should be the point of focus. It is true that, a vast section of the world's population
live
Suggestion
lives
in abject poverty.
For example
, according to a recent publication by the World Health Organization, two-
third
of the world's population live below a dollar per day. Since there are limited resources available to cater for the needs of people, some people assert that these scarce resources should be used to solve the issue of poverty rather than focusing on protecting
wildlife
. In summary, despite divergent opinions regarding
protection
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the protection
of animal
species
and catering for human needs, I believe that the significance attached to
protection
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the protection
of animal
species
, and the attendant consequence of
preservation
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the preservation
of the
ecosystem
cannot be overemphasized, as
this
would in turn impact positively on the social aspect of human life.
Submitted by philiporobosa on

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