Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give your own opinion and examples based on your experience

Some people argue that owing to the technological advances; electronic gadgets have been replacing the big
screen
for watching movies while others insist that watching movies in a theatre, is an unparalleled experience and can never be substituted. I personally believe that despite the breathtaking view of the silver
screen
, people prefer mobile
screen
due to its being convenient as well as cost effective. On the one hand, the audio-visual effects in a film theatre, are particularly unique to them, which provide an incredible opportunity for the audience to enjoy movies.
Therefore
, supporters of big screens believe that enjoying films in three-dimensional theatres, is the main factor responsible for attracting the attention of spectators.
In addition
, in these 3D films, one feel like he is a part of that film crew, which makes it an enjoyable and fantastic thing. In America
,
Accept space
,
in an interview conducted by
Arts Council
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the Arts Council
,
for example
, 90% of the people who visit the cinemas once in a month described that they
couldnot
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could not
relish watching films on mobile
screen
because of poor quality of audiovisual effects and they prefer watching on a big
screen
.
On the other hand
, enjoying movies on tables and mobile devices, is relatively inexpensive because all the newly released films are available on
internet
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the internet
free of cost.
Furthermore
, one can watch films at any time of the day whenever he wants because there is no time constraint as compared to the cinemas. In my opinion, nowadays people have subscribed to movie channels and choose to stay at homes while watching on their electronic devices, to enjoy to the fullest extent.In England,
for instance
, 80% of the Britishers watch films in their spare time on their mobile screens, they
further
described that
this
mean is getting popularity due to being cost effective. In conclusion,
although
cinematic choreography is inciting the people to watch on big screens, yet electronics devices have been
superseding
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superseded
it, over
last
few decades.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
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  • In general

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