Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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It is true that some people know from an early age what

career

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they want to pursue, and they are happy to spend the rest of their lives in the same profession. While I accept that

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may suit many people, I believe that others enjoy changing careers or seeking job

satisfaction

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in different ways. On the one hand, having a defined

career

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path can certainly lead to a satisfying

working

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work

life. Many people decide as young children what they want to do as adults, and it gives them a great sense of

satisfaction

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to work towards their goals and gradually achieve them.

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, many children dream of becoming doctors,

but to realise

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but realise this

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ambition they

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ambition, they

need to gain the relevant qualifications and undertake years of training. In my experience, very few people who have qualified as doctors choose to change

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career

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careers

because they find their work so rewarding, and because they have invested so much time and effort to reach their goal.

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, people find happiness in their working lives in different ways.

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, not everyone dreams of doing a particular job, and it can be equally rewarding to try a variety of professions; starting out on a completely new

career

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path can be a reinvigorating experience.

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, some people see their jobs as simply a means of earning money, and they are happy if their salary is high enough to allow them to enjoy life outside work.

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, job

satisfaction

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is often the result of working conditions, rather than the

career

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itself.

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, a positive working atmosphere, enthusiastic colleagues, and an inspirational boss can make working life much more satisfying, regardless of the profession.

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summary, both sides seem to have some sound arguments.

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, I am of the opinion that

peresevering

quietly and steadily persevering especially in detail or exactness

persevering

in one profession not

necessarely

in such a manner as could not be otherwise

necessarily

brings more

satisfaction

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people

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peoples'

peoples

lives.

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, individuals should the

freedoom

the condition of being free; the power to act or speak or think without externally imposed restraints

freedom

to change jobs if they want to.

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