Some products can be made quickly by a machine. Other items take a long time to be made by hand. As a buyer, which do you prefer and why? Give specific details and examples in your answer.
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Therefore it
is clear that buyers prefer handmade goods for reasons that relate to quality of workmanship.
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companies have far more ethical attitudes towards the environment. Use synonyms
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Consequently
, since modern consumers are more environmentally conscious than ever before, these findings have clearly contributed to their preference for handmade goods.
In conclusion, there are compelling reasons for why modern consumers favour handmade goods. In the future, as environmental issues worsen, Linking Words
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